Feedback at 01:24

After creating my double page spreads I decided to get some feedback from my peers. Here is the feedback I gathered:

They are all good but the ones that stand out to me more are numbers 14, 12, 6 & 5. Only because they are set out in a good way and attracted my eye straight away. I wouldn't say that using colours for this particular article would be relevant, especially for a rock music magazine. But out of those 4 I like the title on number 6 but the layout on number 5. On numbers 12 and 14, I like the red effect and the black background.

I think the colours are good but they don't work with this story. The best one created mainly have the black ground. My favorite ones are 9, 10 & 14. For a rock music magazine black suites it better. Also for number 14 using the pictures behind was a good effect because it wasn't over the top, it was just right.

Using columns rather than paragraphs is so much better! It looks like a proper double page spread when it is done like that. Keeping all the writing on one side is good aswell but having it on both sides spreads it out and makes it look less to read but it doesnt look as professional. I think that number 14 is the best because you have made the most progess but the others are good too.